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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hey, Lauren!

This was so interesting! I loved the tiny little facts you put in and then added to with magical ideas! That's so clever!

I've never been to Italy (sadly) but my mum went last year and she said that it was absolutely boiling, so good work on being accurate! And through the way you wrote the heat, I could feel it as well (even though it's currently freezing) so good work on that!

I loved Lily's enthusiasm, she definitely inherited that from Arthur! ;)

I quite liked Ivy and Alice as well, they seemed like a good bunch of friends to have. :)

Overall, I really enjoyed this one-shot! Good work! :D


- Kayla. :)

Author's Response: Hi Kayla :)

I'm so happy you found this interesting! Adding in the facts was particularly fun for me.

I've just been to Italy myself which is where the inspiration for this actually came from. I'm glad I did the descriptions well though.

Lily's enthusiasm was so cool to write but when you're going around Rome, I'd find it hard not to be so excitable!

Thank you so much for leaving such a lovely review! I really appreciate it!

Lauren :)

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