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Review:AlexFan says:
Oh wow, this was just, wow. There are very few stories around that have anything to do with Death himself but this one is especially unique because Fred had to go through trials.

I liked this, despite the fact that it was depressing because Fred is dead (something that I'm never going to get over) I really enjoyed this. I found it interesting and I could clearly picture in my head everything that was happening.

The pace wasn't too fast but it wasn't too slow either, it was just right. The only thing that I can think to critique on is the fact that there were a few grammar errors throughout the story. Nothing big though, just small typos that I noticed.

Other than that, great job on this!

Author's Response: Hai! Thank you for taking the time to read and review my HC entry *hug*

When I was still in the process of creating this idea I thought that since wizards live lives to interesting and full of wonder, their deaths cannot be anything boring (for most). As many of my story ideas emerge, I mashed up many "what if's", thus creating some obstacles for Fred to overcome in order to get what he seemingly wishes for when he realises he's dead and with nowhere to go.

I'm never going to be over his death either. It was a cruel thing to do, albeit understandable. People die in wars and everything who fought in the Battle of Hogwarts were aware of the risks. However, this does not make it easier :(

Thank you for letting me know that I have to re-read it and correct what I didn't spot the first time. And thank you for reading this and reviewing. I'm very thankful for your thoughts *hugs*


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