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Review:marauderfan says:
Ooh, this was really original! I liked Louis's voice as a narrator and liked the idea of him going off to find a Veela - I'd forgotten he is part Veela as well. And Sirena is so interesting - when you first introduced her name I assumed she was a Siren, and then when she led him to the cliff I thought she'd trick him into jumping off it or something, like the mythical Sirens lured sailors into shipwreck against the sides of cliffs. So I was kind of surprised when she was a mermaid! I really hope you do continue this into a short story, there's so much more I'd love to find out about her. And how Louis learned to breathe underwater :P Excellent work on this!

Author's Response: Well, a Siren is a species of merpeople, so that's where I got the idea from. The fact that she'd led him off of the cliff was an inspiration from the mythologies. Oh, him breathing underwater will definitely be explained! You're one of the first to mention that he can! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!(:

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