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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hi!

Okay firstly, I commend you for the use of all the different parentheses! I've never seen that before! It was done so well, and when I first read the title I kept thinking, "That's a lot of parentheses! It seems a bit over-the-top!"

But now that I've read it, it makes so much sense and it makes it such an effective one-shot!

The way you wrote all the tiny parts, it was almost as if Snape was mechanical and it just made it so broken and fragmented and wow!

(Also, I loved the banner on this! It suits the story perfectly!)

This piece is truly brilliant, I hardly have any words because it's just SO AMAZING! I'm so amazed at the talent you have!

Seriously, I am in awe of this one-shot, it's just so fantastic and perfect and amazing and WOAH.

I loved all the science-y bits you added in, it just made it less emotional and really separated us from him, which is a real talent to have!

Anyway, I absolutely adored this one-shot! It's one of my favourites that I've read so far!

Awesome job on it!

10/10

- Kayla. :D

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