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Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
Hello, here reviewing for the HC!

So this was a great entry for the House Cup, I really enjoyed reading it and your take on Regulus's thoughts and the fact that he knows the his death is imminent. You really captured the uncertainty of his thoughts that were meshed together with his hopes of survival. I felt really sympathetic towards Regulus and I know that he is often made out to be the cowardly, evil brother by many writers but I think he is a brave, selfless man from what I read in the HP books.

I love the way you used repetitive language throughout and kept reverting back to the fact that he hopes. It was really poignant for me and symbolised that despite his wishes, he is crashing towards fate and he knows that he will die. It was really sad and haunting to read that actually. I'm glad that he still hoped for his survival even when he believes and knows that it won't come. Hope is a pretty powerful thing.

I'm glad you talked about how Kreacher was his companion and the person he trusted above all else at this time. Kreacher is actually really devoted and faithful to his previous master so it's nice to see that the bond and the loyalty is returned. I loved the descriptions of his journey, which went along with theme of travel really nicely, and the way you used so many literary devices and made the sentences sound almost poetic. It was lovely.

I only saw a couple of grammatical mistakes, barely anything, which is a great feat considering your authors note and how you lost your previous story. This story is so well written that it seems like it was your first. I loved the way you wrote this, it was so interesting and a beautiful sad entry.

Maz x

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