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Review:AlexFan says:
Hello! I'll get right into it! This was a really unique as I never pictured one of Percy's daughter being forced to move schools for bad behavior. Sure I pictured them as being maybe a little eccentric but never being forced to move schools.

The one thing that stood out to me is that you kept slipping up on your verb tense. Sometimes you'd write in past tense and then switch to present tense and back. I also think that you could make this story better by adding in more description. Going into more detail about the packing and things instead of just skipping to the day that the family leaves. You could've also described the scenery outside of the bus so that the reader knows the general scenery of the place.

And there were also a few grammar errors throughout the chapter. But other than that though, I found this really interesting and I enjoyed reading this!

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