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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hi there!

This is really interesting! I generally hate everything history/Ancient things (I'm the person that runs from the room whenever someone mentions things like that) but this was a surprise!

It's really intriguing, and I'm thinking I should take a look at the Harbinger to find out more because I was literally at the edge of my seat and panicking because the scrolling thing at the side was nearly at the end! :p

You write really well, the descriptions and terror were just WOW!

However, I did notice one tiny typo:

"There is nothing we can do for her. She is [died]."

It should be 'dead'. ;) Other than that, I didn't notice any other errors!

So yeah, I really enjoyed reading this, which is a massive surprise! Good job! :D

- Kayla. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm sorry for the late response.

Cleo


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