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Review:AlexFan says:
That was awesome! This was funny and serious all at the same time! I can totally understand where Victoire is coming from with the whole blondes are stupid thing. My best friend is a blonde and some people just assume that she's stupid because of it when she's not. And I myself don't have to deal with that stereotype but I deal with other ones.

I loved Teddy in this, I just loved the fact that he was so cocky all the time. He put a smile on my face. He and Vic may claim that they don't like each other but the way that they worked together said otherwise.

My favourite part had to be when Victoire demanded that everyone listen and take her seriously. I absolutely loved that part, I was like "You go Vic, you show them who's boss. GIRL POWER!" I can't believe she threatened the Greek Ministry of Magic though! The minister was so cool with it though and his response to not following protocol was hilarious.

My favourite line had to be when Victoire told Teddy that not everyone could be one with the donkey's (for the sake of keeping it twelve plus, I switched words). I laughe so hard at that you would not believe.

All in all a very interesting and enjoyable read!

Author's Response: What an awesome review! Thanks so much :)

Yeah, I got the idea to explore the dumb blonde stereotype as an obstacle for Victoire because I have a friend like that. She's super smart, knows way more about any given topic than most people around her, and yet people often sort of talk down to her. And really, what it boils down to is that she's very pretty, and she's blonde. People treat you differently. And, I mean, who would be prettier and blonder than the daughter of Fleur Delacour? I think everyone deals with some sort of stereotype. I wanted to show how frustrating it might be to always have people expecting less of you, even though you're perfectly capable.

I'm so glad you loved Teddy! He was so fun to write. His voice was different--I started giving him extra contractions because the story had to be under 5,000 words, so it was a way to lower my word count. But in the end I really enjoyed the voice it gave him--very confident, a little arrogant, and relaxed.

Favorite parts and favorite lines MAKE MY DAY! Thank you so much!!! :D
My face just has a huge smile on it, from reading which parts you liked. I am thrilled that you found it funny. Thank you so much again for taking the time to write such a kind, thorough review! It was fantastic!


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