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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello!

Okay, first of all -- THANK YOU FOR BREAKING MY HEART, DID YOU THINK I WOULDN'T NEED EMOTIONS?!

I'm sorry about my yelling, it's just when Sirius, James and Lily are mentioned I get very upset. ;~;

You wrote this really well! You got Sirius' personality spot-on and his anguish was very, very, very heartbreaking. :(

And the way you wrote about Remus being a traitor made me sad, even though it's canon that Sirius was suspicious of him. I just wanted to scream at him, "IT'S PETER!"

I also loved the way you wrote Sirius being scared/getting a bit of a fright, and then juxtaposing that with his freedom on the bike in the air. It was such an excellent contrast, so kudos!

And it made me sad when Sirius checked on Peter, but to find an empty house, the first thing that went through his mind was that he'd been hurt. It just shows what a loyal person Sirius was, and that just hurts ME so much! D:

This was an absolutely lovely piece, and you wrote it so nicely! I loved this story, it was so heartbreaking but it also made me smile at how much Sirius cared for Harry. :')

10/10

- Kayla. ♥

Author's Response: Aw sorry for breaking your heart (not really...). I'm so glad you enjoyed it despite how sad it was. And thanks so much for leaving one of my favorite reviews ever! :)

I know, Sirius deserved so much better. I always just imagined him when he first found Peter's place to be worried about Peter as well as Lily and James and maybe the realization wouldn't hit him until later.

So glad you thought the characterization was good!

And thank you for the amazing review! :)


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