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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hi!

This piece was just so lovely and heart-warming. You wrote it really nicely with just the right amount of angst and fluff. :')

I hardly ever see any stories on Rosmerta, it's nice seeing one! Especially when they are as good as this one!

I loved the lyrics that Jaxson wrote, they're very warm and nice. Did you make them up yourself? Because if so, you should become a song writer as well as a novelist! :p

I loved the delicacy in the story as well, it was strung together really nicely and made a sort of harmonious feel to it.

I also enjoyed Jayden's personality, he was a real gentleman and was a genuinely nice guy. He was a very interesting character.

Overall, I enjoyed this poignant piece! You did a really good job with it!

- Kayla. :)

Author's Response: ohmymerlin,

Oh, thank you so much for checking out my story and reviewing! It is much appreciated.

Yes, this story was very much a mixture of angst and fluff. I tend to write sad stories with a little bit of hope at the end.

And Rosmerta is definitely not written about much. I was trying to go for some originality points, but really, I enjoyed coming up with a back story for her and dig deeper into what she would've been like.

You liked Jaxson lyrics? Yes, those are mine, cut down for TOS. We're only allowed 4 lines of poetry, even if they are our own. ;( I wanted it to be a bit more, but had to delete it. Oh, well, happy that you liked it though. :)

Thanks so much for the detailed review. It is very nice of you to comment.

Much appreciated,
Dark Whisper


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