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Review:teh tarik says:
Hello there! I'm here for the House Cup Review-on-and-on!

Well, this is such a unique and charming piece of writing! I always enjoy reading stories which focus on careers and jobs in the magical world, and it was very interesting to see a story going into such detail about things like long distance Apparition and the routine of a Ministry Obliviator. You've done a really good job in writing a day in the life of Alicia Spinnet as an Obliviator, and how a surprise trip to Slovenia is such a welcome break from the mundane routine of her day-to-day job. Also, your fic fits so seamlessly with canon and the Potterverse :)

I enjoyed the bit with the crup very much. Alicia was very methodical, very professional in her undertaking of her job. And that ending bit, where she decides to linger a little longer and enjoy the beautiful isolated beach is a lovely moment, and probably will appease Alicia's wanderlust, at least for a little while.

This is a lovely story! It's a simple, light read, and it really did fit the travel theme very well. Great work; I enjoyed reading this!


Author's Response: Hey!

Thank you so much for leaving such a kind review! I really tried to do something different with this fic, and to focus not only on travel, but explaining Alicia's story and her job, so it's great to hear that you enjoyed hearing about the details of her job. It's also always a great plus to hear that the story seems to fit in canon! :)

It took me a while to think of a small situation where one obliviator - Alicia might be needed (I was trawling through "magical creatures in Harry Potter" for quite a while before I stumbled upon the crup!). And the ending bit was mainly to further enhance the 'travel idea', so I'm glad you think that the theme was strong throughout the fic!

Thank you so much for reading and for leaving such a lovely review! Your words definitely made me smile :)
- Charlotte

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