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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hey there!

Okay, I absolutely LOVE anything James and Lily, and I'm always looking for stories that portray them in different ways and you just did this so fantastically, and it's made me so happy! :D

All throughout this one-shot I was chuckling and the line, 'Meh, I've seen better' had me in stitches. It just seems so Lily-like! :p

I liked the idea of the two of them Apparating to a beach, I adore beaches and I could just imagine the two of them spending all their time at this beach.

(It also reminds me of a piece of fanart by julvett where they are at the beach on their honeymoon and James is talking to the mirror with Sirius in it :p)

I really liked the last line as well, because we all KNOW she's going to end up with James, and it's sweet seeing her slowly transition to this strange idea of starting to fancy James. :p

So yeah, I really loved this story, James and Lily were so adorable and believable. ♥

- Kayla. :)

Author's Response: Hey Kayla!

Thankyou so much for the lovely review :) and I am sorry for such a late response!

I'm really glad you liked my portrayal of James and Lily, and that the story made you happy (your review has just made me so happy :D) Haha, 'Meh, I've seen better' was the only response I could see Lily giving at that moment in time - I'm glad you liked that line and that the fic had you chuckling :)

I'm glad you liked the idea of them Apparating to the beach - I thought it would be the perfect place for their relationship to start changing. And in my mind I can see them returning to this beach a lot (especially for special occasions ;)) so I'm glad you can see that too. Oh, and I looked up that piece of fanart after seeing your review too, great pic!

I think it must have felt very strange for Lily to start liking James after disliking him for so many years, and I really enjoyed writing about the start of that change. I'm so pleased you liked it and that you thought James and Lily were believable :)

Thanks again for such a lovely review ♥


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