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Review:ohmymerlin says:

Well, THAT was an interesting plot twist! I didn't expect that at all. I quick reread to see if there were any hints and there was! It was a very subtle hint, so kudos!

At first I was kind of a bit bored with the idea of Angelina grieving over Fred but then finding out she was pregnant made it so much more interesting! When I reread it, everything made sense, why she wanted to continually run away and blend in and things like that.

This was written really well, and I really liked it! I really enjoyed reading this! You did a really good job of it! :D

- Kayla. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the plot twist!

I wanted to show the twist with some hints so it wasn't completely unbelievable. I'm sorry you got a little bored. The repetitiveness was something I tried to avoid but it was a little unavoidable!

I'm glad you liked it!

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