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Review:ShadowRose says:
Hello there!

I really like the focus of this story - Sirius's flight from his family.

The first scene with Regulus is really well written, in my opinion. It really shows Regulus's conflicted feelings about Sirius, because he makes all these rude comments about Gryffindor and Sirius's choice, but at the same time, he still helps Sirius and trails after him like a little puppy dog all the way until the end.

I love the caring people you placed on Sirius's trip - it really helps Sirius confirm his belief that he's doing the right thing in running away. This line, "In just one night he had experienced kindness beyond imagination from the very muggles that his parents and the rest of their society wanted to snuff out." was brilliant.

I like how you included how Sirius came across the motorbike! I can very much imagine him trying to convince himself that it was abandoned, so it was okay for him to take it. And all his thoughts about what he could do to the bike, when we all know what's going to happen to it, I loved it. :)

This was a really great description of Sirius's running-away; I can definitely envision his escape being like that! Very well-written - great job!

-ShadowRose (Taylor)

Author's Response: Awww schucks!! You make me blush!! Thank you so much for the read & review! I had a lot of fun writing this and am glad you enjoyed reading it!!

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