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Review:ShadowRose says:
Hello there!

This is a really fun story - normally I'm not big on stories that only feature OCs, but this one is tons of fun. Tibbie's very relatable, and I think it's funny that she basically stalked Elbow Patch by riding the bus. Her little observations that she makes throughout the one-shot are great too.

Elbow Patch is definitely a realistic character - I've met people like that before. It's like, "you have such a pretty face, it's a shame you have to ruin it with that nasty personality of yours." I like that even though he proved to be such a annoying person, Tibbie still got a happy ending with Henry.

I like that you included buses as your method of travel - I don't think I've seen anyone else use it! It's such a mundane form of travel that most people pass over it, but there's a whole lot that can happen on one of those things!

Overall, I really enjoyed this one-shot - it was a nice take on the awkward-girl/hot-boy thing, without it being too cliche (oh wow, I just noticed that that's what you wrote in your author's note as well, haha).

-ShadowRose (Taylor)

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much for the lovely review!I'm glad you thought my characters were realistic and not too cliched haha; It was really something I was worried about. I'm so glad you enjoyed my one shot,
Charlie
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