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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello!

This was really interesting! I absolutely LOVED the language in this one-shot. I started to mentally write down all the words I was going to commend you for using but then there were too many for my poor, fried brain to remember (I've been doing an essay most of the day D:) haha. :p

I think you've really written the Weasley family well! They're just so believable and I absolutely loved the way you portrayed Molly's worrying over her family. It was extremely canon-like, and it made my heart go all mushy because of how much Molly loves them all. :')

I absolutely loved the last line with Fred just reacting as if Ginny erupting tentacles was a normal occurrence - which in the Weasley household it probably was haha! :p

Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this story! It was written really well, and all the characters were portrayed excellently!

Good job!

- Kayla. :)

Author's Response: I really enjoyed reading your review. It makes my day when someone likes something I wrote.

I had a blast writing this story and it was so fast. There is something about the Weasley clan that makes writing them one of the simplest things to do.I think it's because we all know someone like them. In secret, I think they were JKR's secret weapon, because the HP series wouldn't have been half as interesting, funny or heart-warming without that bunch.

Thanks for the R&R, and I am really glad you enjoyed my little story.

Ken


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