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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello!

I've always been curious about Charlie's Apparition test and you've written it so well, I'm just accepting it as canon now! :p

I like the way you wrote Elspeth grumpy when Charlie landed on her - it was true to her old lady criteria :p - but then she was happier because he was guilty and apologised. It made her seem very old-lady-ish. And I've had to deal with many old people (I used to work in a pharmacy near a retirement home) so I find this extremely believable!

Also, can I just say that I absolutely LOVE the name Elspeth?! It's literally a name that says, 'I am an old lady'. :p

I really loved your characterisation of Charlie, he seemed very canon and I liked how Molly was the one to deter him from his destination.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this one-shot! It was written amazingly, you really have a talent for writing!

10/10

- Kayla. :)

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