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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
This is a lovely story.

At first I was a little confused as I wasn't too sure where to place myself in the story because of the flashbacks and how quickly the story changed but I soon got to grips with it and understood what was happening.

The whole story of Frank and Alice was really sad but its interesting to wonder if they had retained any part of their memory at all and I feel you really helped answer some of the concerns even within this story. I love how this fits in exactly with canon as you would never really know whats happening in Alice's head yet you still put in the little visits from Augusta and Neville which I completely love.

I loved how she doesn't know about the baby and then the little snippets you have into their life, from them not meeting, to them dating, to them having the baby and then the torture. I thought the scene of torture was really interesting especially as it was the most traumatic experience in their life. It reminded me of the scene in the Department of Mysteries at the Ministry in OOTP so I love that you're in keeping with the death eater styles of things.

Finally when Alice says Neville's name its really sweet as it would have been something Neville had been waiting his whole life to hear. It also shows that there could be some hope of recovery for this family after the trauma which had happened. Alice's motherly thoughts were also really interesting.

Well done
GinevraMollyPotter
Slytherin

Author's Response: Hello!

It was meant to be a bit confusing to read, don't worry! I wanted Alice's scatterbrained mind to shine through this fic. :p

I always try to make things as canon as possible because I'm one of those crazy nutters. :p So I'm glad you liked it!

I did envision the DoM scene in OoTP when I wrote that, so it must have shone through! :p

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you for leaving a review and sorry for the long wait for the response!

- Kayla. :)


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