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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

This was so original! I really loved the whole plot here, and Miriam's character was also really refreshing! Being thrust from 1955 to 1840 must've been a humongous shock, so I'm a little surprised and doubtful about Miriam's complacency throughout the days/weeks of the trip, but maybe she's just a really practical person who doesn't focus on problems but on solutions.

Anyway, I loved how she had to travel all the way to Africa to find a group of shamans who would invent the time turner - and how she herself had helped to invent it! I liked how she had to stowaway on a ship to get to South Africa because of course it was the only means available. The way you introduced the situation at the start with Voldemort, her cleaning up the mess also made the entire plot seem very plausible. Overall, I thought this was a really well written and well thought out story and I really enjoyed reading it :)

- Charlotte/maskedmuggle
House Cup 2013 Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it seemed plausible, given that it was a very implausible kind of story! :P

As for her being complacent - I was hoping to show that with a situation so far out of her control, she's only doing what she can because simply worrying about it will get her nowhere. What you said about her "focusing on solutions rather than problems" is what I was going for!

Thanks so much for your review and I'm really glad you enjoyed reading the story! :)


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