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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello!

I absolutely love reading Sirius running away stories, and I think you've written this one so perfectly! I can really imagine this is the way Sirius ran away! It's believable and fits with his personality from what we knew in the series!

However, before I say anything else I just want to say something. When the bike started sputtering and the man asked, "Are ya outta gas?"

Well, English people tend to use the word 'petrol'. I'm not too sure if people are starting to change over because I don't live in England, so I might be wrong, but I'm 90% sure they call it 'petrol'. :)

Anyway, I absolutely loved the way he found the motorbike. I kind of like that he stole it, it does seem a bit Sirius-y and the way he assured himself that it was abandoned and he was 'rescuing' it seemed very canon, in my opinion! I could imagine Sirius assuring himself that he didn't steal the bike, just rescued it haha! ;)

I loved the little ideas that Sirius has about the motorbike, and we know that he makes it a flying motorbike so that was great!

I also liked the way you represented Regulus and Sirius' brother relationship. It was done very brotherly, and I think that's so nice to see! Lately I've been reading a lot of Marauders things where Sirius and Regulus hate each other, but I quite like that you've made them brotherly. It's a nice change. :)

Anywho, this was a wonderful one-shot! You wrote it really well!

10/10

- Kayla. :)

Author's Response: Yea!! Thanks for such an awesome read and review! I'm glad that you liked it!

I feel kinda silly about the gas vs petrol thing! Didn't even think about it. My American ignorance is showing here I guess! LOL!

Other than that...I'm glad that you thought I was able to keep him in mostly in cannon and very glad you enjoyed reading it. It was fun to write and a refreshing challenge to step out of my comfort zone on this one!!

Thanks!
Laura


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