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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Haha first of all can I please comment on your Authors note, Britain Germany and other sunless countries? That is completely brilliant and I salute you!

Also your story is well hilarious! I love a bit of comedy and Voldemort but with Voldemort, Bella, Lucius and Snape what more could you ask for? You have created a wonderful AU universe with the fashion designers instead of sides of a war which I think is a stroke of brilliance on your part. I love the rivalry between the two fashion labels and making it so Harry's fashion label is at more fashion weeks than Voldemort also shows that Harry has the upper hand even in this universe which is great!

Voldemort in the travel agents is something I had never thought I would see. His demeanor and just style of speech is perfect but in the muggleverse then it just seems hilarious.

I love Bella on the plane in particular. What would have possessed her to even hold the baby in the first place. She has no motherly instinct and I love how she basically just dismisses the idea of ever having children. I loved it because it's just so true. She is so wrapped up in her own problems and so messed up a child would be well, just a disaster!

One thing I wasn't so sure on was when Snape thought of Lucius as a 'sneaky slytherin' for their little incident together. I thought to some extent that was not completely representative as Snape was a Slytherin himself so he probably wouldn't have associated the sneakiness with being a Slytherin if that makes sense?

Also Snape deserting Voldemort for Harry is again fantastic as it seems to flow so well into the story!

Well done!

Author's Response: Hi there! Of course you can comment on my author's note, I'm so glad that you liked it!

Haha, I'm so glad that you liked the universe! I had so much fun writing it, I'm almost tempted to have another foray into and explore the rivalries and hatred even more because it was such fun here!

Yup, Voldemort's actions are pretty funny to write. I almost wish that he had to go and live in the muggle world for a while as a wizard because that would be great!

I'm not really sure, I imagined that she had more forced into her hands as opposed to being offered to hold it. That child would be far too scary for its own good and would probably bite people's ankles in the playground or something.

I get what you mean now. I suppose Lucius was angry at not getting it himself at first so took his anger out on Snape in that way.

Thank you for the lovely compliments and great review! ♥

-Kiana


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