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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hi there!

Okay - WOW! This was written so well! I absolutely love the originality of it! I've never read something like this!

I feel like you've got Charlie's personality perfectly! You wrote Arthur really canonically and I like that you made Charlie and Molly argue, a lot of fanfictions make all the Weasleys get along perfectly dandy and no one ever has arguments other than Percy, so to see you've written a very real relationship between a mother and son is a real breather!

You've also written Charlie's desire to be a dragon keeper really well! I could feel his determination in becoming a dragon keeper, and it fits him absolutely perfectly!

I loved how Arthur was in trouble because he didn't compliment Molly's parsnips -- I can see that happening haha!

This was an absolutely fantastic one-shot! Good job!

10/10

- Kayla. :)

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