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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hello there!

I liked the idea of Molly having to move school due to being bad, as it made sense that Percy would act like that because he's always been such a sticker to the rules and seeing how far he went here made me laugh.

Molly was quite a character and made me chuckle. I liked how she was a good quidditch player because it highlighted the differences between her and percy even more.
The one thing I would suggest is watching your dialogue grammar because I found quite a few errors such as “Okay, three, two, one” my dad said, ' you missed a comma here and in several other cases too. In some cases you also put a period there instead.

I hope this review helps in someway and makes sense because it's been written on a phone while on a bus!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Thank you for the critisim.
I didn't have any time to proff read, so sorry about the mistakes:/
I will fix them once I have more time.

~Sarah


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