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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

This was so, so, so lovely!! I love Luna and I thought you did a great job on her characterisation here! There were so many aspects I really liked - her clothing, the fact that she was a Junior Reporter and didn't take over a higher position, and this sentence: "She was capable of making any situation a lot more interesting, if not also a lot stranger as well." I liked how believable and realistic you made the whole situation feel - I can totally imagine Luna riding a muggle train instead of apparating!

I had a feeling I might be seeing Rolf appear in this journey, so i was completely delighted when he did! I loved how quickly they seemed to connect! I was a bit uncertain to hear about Luna's 'crush' on Neville, but since she didn't seem to be focused too much on it made it more Luna-ish. I also really liked Luna's mother's advice about journeys, and how it all tied together with your ending sentences. So all in all, I really enjoyed reading this story! :)

- Charlotte/maskedmuggle
House Cup 2013 Ravenclaw

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