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Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
Hello! Here for the HC review-a-thon!

This was very sweet one shot with the underlying tone about finding the place that suits you and your comfortable with. I couldn't help but think that at the start of this one shot that Molly would be severely unhappy upon her arrival and absolutely hate her new school but I'm glad she managed to find happiness here. I always think the best source if happiness is the one you get unexpectedly and for Molly that seems to be the case.

Sometimes you don't fit in and that's the case for many people which is why this story was so relatable. I felt really glad for Molly that she was able to be more creative because the school specialised in creativity and she would be able to indulge in that passion than she would have been able to at Hogwarts. I have to say this really reminded me of the time when I had to move schools. The previous one I had been at wasn't all to great but it was where all my friends were and I didn't want to leave. I had been pessimistic about it, like Molly. I had to take an exam too and when I got in I was actually surprised to find more facilities that would allow me to broaden my abilities.

The relatable nature of your story was really awesome, I loved the way the family were together and they made stops where she bought books and had something to eat which really fit with the travel theme. Your actually one of the first one shots I've read for this travel prompt that has quite a lot of touristy moments and I really enjoyed reading them! All I'm all I thought this was a great entry for the HC, you used the Salem Institute and made it your own with originality and there were no spelling or grammar mistakes at all that I saw! I want to know what happens to Molly after this :P

Lovely story,

Maz x

Author's Response: Wow, I am so glad that you enjoyed this! I am happy that I made it relatable for you, and that I was able to connect it to real-world things that have happened to you.

I really wanted to make this as a better oppertunity for Molly, and have her realize this, so I am glad that you saw that.

I am glad you enjoyed it, and want to see what happens next!

~Sarah


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