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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Kayla!

Ah this story brought tears to my eyes, it was honestly one of the saddest things I have come across in a while! I loved how we got a really broad aspect of their lives so we really got a sense of Alice and Frank before, during and after the war so we could understand and see how devastating these changes were to them.

I think my favourite parts were almost the ones after the war such as when Neville and Augusta go to visit them because theyíre just so sad due to them not being able to comprehend things and thatís what really made me tear up. Then the way Alice viewed her life with having to be helped to do things and not being able to recall anything as it shows how immobile they really are.

The memories of them being Aurors were really great too as it showed how powerful and awesome they used to be. I really found it fitting that it was with Bellatrix given what she did to them and all and it acted as an almost prelude to what happened to them later on in life. Another thing I really liked in that era was the scene with Neville and they were both talking to him. It was just so adorable and tragic because we knew what was about to happen but couldnít do a single thing to save them.

The ending of this was perfect as it gave me and Neville some hope that she may recover one day. Just saying his name was what really got to me, because it was such a simple thing yet she hadnít been able to utter it for so many years which was horrible! This was a really heart-breaking but lovely one-shot, Kayla! ♥


Author's Response: Hey, Kiana!

I'm sorry I made you cry, I don't do it on purpose! D:

I really wanted to show ALL their lifespan without dragging it on, so I'm glad that I have seemed to pull it off!

Yeah, the last line was sweet, wasn't it? :') I really loved writing that last paragraph-line-thingy. When I wrote it I just grinned and made myself feel all squishy haha!

Anyway, thank you so much for this lovely review and I'm so sorry about the ridiculous amount of time there was for this response!

- Kayla. :)

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