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Review:Debra20 says:
Hey there! I'm here for the HC review-a-thon!

I'm loving all these travel stories and yours is a very creative one! I enjoyed every minute of it. I'm beginning to warm up to Next-Gen stories thanks to all the marvellous creations I've been reading lately, and I think I'm adding yours on my list of worthwhile stories :D

You really did a great job with the HC theme. Not only did your character travel, but his journey made sense! I empathised a lot with Louis in this story. With two other sisters, a brother may sometimes feel the need to stand out, to do what he can to prove he is a man and is perfectly capable of taking care not only of himself but his sisters as well. It's not easy being the single male in a family of girls, that's for sure. So it made a lot of sense that he would accept risking his neck to seek out this mysterious creature that has been wreaking havoc.

It would be great if you'd write at least another chapter. I'd love to find out more about Sirena. She seems like such a mysterious character that it would be a pity not to reveal more of her, Not to mention that in Greek mythology Sirens are associated with Death. Their song though beautiful and sweet, was nonetheless sad and put the listener in a lethargic state, that could prove deadly. I have a feeling there's much and more in store for Louis if he allows himself to be fascinated by these creatures. It would really be a shame to stop here when there's so much potential for this story!

All in all, a very creative, very fun entry. I'm glad I've read it!
Debra20

Author's Response: I'm very happy to hear that I have managed to help convert you to like Next-Generation! I always thought that Louis must have had it difficult growing up with two older sisters; the need to prove himself in not only within his immediately family but also within his extended family must be very much a factor in his life, however big it is. I'm definitely going to write another chapter, if not at least two. There is definitely much more in store for Louis to come! Thank you for reading and reviewing!(:

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