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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hey there!

I really enjoyed reading this story! I loved your portrayal of Victoire, she seemed very real to me. I could understand her desire to get away, especially if her parents were so protective and sheltered. It makes sense, so that's always a good thing! :p

I loved the way you explained her on a coach, I could feel her discomfort and I really just wanted to give Condescending Alex a smack! I've never really been to a place with American people, but my parents have and they always say that each time there's an annoying person in the tour group, it's always an American. :p So you picked the right choice haha!

Silent Sam seemed rather sweet! I liked his polar bear joke haha!

I'm kind of glad the way you showed Teddy and Victoire's relationship, that it was suffocating and was a partial reason for her to go away on a big trip. Teddy seemed a bit, 'Oh you're my property so no one can flirt with you blah blah blah' so I didn't like him, I was kind of glad when we got Dominique's letter saying that he was moping around, good riddance in my opinion! :p

I really liked the giant in this! You wrote his speech really well and I liked his story, it was really interesting.

Overall, this was a wonderful one-shot!

Great work!

- Kayla. :D

Author's Response: Hello! :)

I'm very pleased to hear you liked the story! I loved coming up with Victoire's character so having her well received is great to hear. I'm glad you could relate to her a little and understand her need to travel.

Haha, I'm glad you could relate to the scene on the coach as well! I know, Alexander really was awful, wasn't he? I enjoyed winding Victoire up with his character, haha. And I'm glad you liked Sam!

Good, I'm glad you thought the breakup was justified and realistic. I definitely agree, Teddy was being a bit suffocating even if he didn't mean to. Haha, "good riddance," I love that! :)

I'm glad you enjoyed Finn as well! It was really fun writing the old story into dialogue and letting Finn tell his tale.

Thank you for this really lovely review! :D


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