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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello!

This was an adorable one-shot, I love Luna and Rolf as a pairing, they just seem perfect together and you've pulled this off very well!

I loved the way you wrote Luna's feelings when she first met Rolf, you wrote it really well!

Although I do have one bit of confusion. It's just this part here:

"My grandfather was the really famous one, but he died when I was twelve, so my father decided to just teach me what he'd learned from my grandfather instead. It was a rather reading-intensive shadowing experience," {Newt} added.

Is that meant to be Rolf? Or was that a new character. Forgive me if it was a different character and I completely missed it! I'm just a tiny bit confused. :p

Anyway, this was a really nice, fluffy one-shot. Good job!

- Kayla. :)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for stopping by :)

I'm happy that you liked seeing Luna and Rolf's first meeting and the way I described Luna's interpretation of the little crush she was feeling.

Yeah, I was trying to figure out when Newt passed when writing that paragraph and I think my unconsciousness slipped in the wrong name. Oops! I'll go back and edit it later, so thanks for pointing that out for me.

Thank you for your lovely review!

-Amanda


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