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Review:LittleLionGirl says:
Well this was an interesting one-shot. You really do have a good start of a story but I would add more detail to the vague things you have in your chapter. Elaborate a little rather then adding "and much more" as for her friends and everything else; mention WHY she doesn't want to go- why her friends are so important and WHAT she did to make her parents move her out of Hogwarts... Other than that you did an amazing job!

Author's Response: Yeah, I agree that I should have added more detail. I didn't have much time. So when I have more I will go and do that(:


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