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Review:LittleLionGirl says:
Well this was an interesting one-shot. You really do have a good start of a story but I would add more detail to the vague things you have in your chapter. Elaborate a little rather then adding "and much more" as for her friends and everything else; mention WHY she doesn't want to go- why her friends are so important and WHAT she did to make her parents move her out of Hogwarts... Other than that you did an amazing job!
XOXOXOX,
LLG

Author's Response: Yeah, I agree that I should have added more detail. I didn't have much time. So when I have more I will go and do that(:

~Sarah


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