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Review:HollyStone73 says:
I loved this! Super cute! I love how well thought out everything was. This details about the dragon breeding and the specifics about the breeding center and the dragons were awesome. It was refreshing to read about a new environment and setting and get a little more insight into life outside of Hogwarts.

I have always had a soft spot for Luna and wondered how she would have met Rolf. I love how she jumped in to the rescue when he burned his hand! The way you working the two of them in together without overdoing it and overwhelming the story with it was awesome.

Another masterpiece! Super great job!

Author's Response: Hi there, thanks for coming by!

I love including (hopefully) interesting details in my work, so I'm glad you appreciated that and didn't feel like all the imagery and dialogue bogged the plot down too much. I'm in the post grad phase of my life and it was interesting to try to figure out what Luna would need to do between Hogwarts and the career we know she eventually ends up in.

It's also lovely that you liked how I put Luna and Rolf together. I tried not to force a love-at-first-sight sort of feeling but instead wanted to make their meeting seem realistic.

Thanks for your kind review!


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