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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Aww!! I really like this! How can you think this isn't a good one-shot?!? It's great!

First of all, it's original. Because in Almost every next-gen story I read, it's always Teddy/Vic, Teddy/Vic. Not that there's anything wrong with Teddy/Vic; I actually quite like the ship. But it's refreshing and different to read about Teddy with someone else!

On that note, I'm not sure how Vic will feel when she finds out her sister is dating her ex, but hey, that's her loss, right? That's what she gets for breaking up with him! :P

I thought it was very romantic of Teddy to take Dom somewhere special, just to ask her out. That says a lot about how he feels for her, and it was so adorable! I think they make a really cute couple, the way you've written them here!

The description was also great. The way you painted a picture of Dom's heels sinking into the sand and the smell of salt really made me feel as though I were there on the beach watching things unfold, instead of reading about it. Great job with that, too!

All in all, this is a LOVELY one-shot, dear! Great job!

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for your LOVELY review!

I am glad you think it's a good one-shot, though its far from what I usually write xP

It's good to hear you found this original as I strive towards originality in my writing. Teddy/Dom are my OTP so I am happy you found this refreshing.

Vic will feel just fine about it, it's been some time after all, haha.

I am glad you thought it to be romantic, and adorable. They do make a cute couple in my mind so it's good to know that came through.

I am pleased you liked the description, and could feel the beach. Thanks a ton!

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