Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:slytherinchica08 says:
What an interesting idea for a story for the house cup. I like how you tied in the theme of traveling without making really the main point of your story but yet the traveling aspect still held importance to it all. I loved the ending of the chapter with her becoming a mermaid before his eyes. I would honestly love to see more of this story and get some more questions answered that I have about this all. My main questions are what will happen now that he knows that she is the problem and what exactly is her game plan with it all? I feel like there is just so much more to be explored with this and that it could really be an interesting story with more information/detail. But its a really good beginning and does a great job of fitting in with the house cup theme. Also I haven't said anything about your chatacterization and that's because I wanted to save it for last. I loved the way you portrayed Louis. He was so different from anything else that I've read him in which adds a nice refreshing mix to your story. And then adding in that mermaid was pretty epic as well. I don't think I've read any storys on this site that include them other than ones that do a retelling of sorts of hp 4. Great job! And thanks for participating in the 2013 house cup!

~slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: All of the different magical creatures that exist are one of my fascinations. Last House Cup, my submission was focused on dragons so I wanted to try another magical creature this time. Louis is one of the characters that I wish can be explored more in the Next-Generation because there are far fewer stories about him! Travelling is such a broad topic and even though I have read many submissions that do an excellent job telling about a vacation, etc. I wanted to try something a little different to switch things up. Thank you for reading and reviewing!(:

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 570
Submit Report: