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Review:LilyEPotter says:
Hi! Here for the House Cup review!

The twist in this story was done very well. It took me a bit to realize that all the traveling had been done in Lavender's mind instead of for real. You also did well in showing how easy it can be to retreat into your mind when you simply can't face reality.

Great story!

Author's Response: Yah, i'm not usually good with twists and I always feel like i'm being blatantly obviously with them but it seems like with most of the reviews i've got for this haven't really seen it coming. I'm really pleased you enjoyed this! I can't imagine what it would be like to be in a war and survive it. It's so far removed from my own experience but the effect of it I can try to see it as being harrowing. Where sometimes the only choice you have of survival is to retreat into your mind because that's the only way escape your demons. Thank you SO much for choosing this story to review, i appreciate it a lot!

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