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Review:marauderfan says:
Wow, this was so good! I think it's really interesting that you decided to write from the POV of Alice while at St. Mungos. It gave the story a really odd feel, like it's hard to tell when things are happening or where they are, and the way I interpreted it, it was like Alice was watching her former self and Frank interact, sort of like when Harry sees things in the Pensieve. And I think that worked out perfectly considering Alice's mental condition at the time. The vagueness is really good.

I thought it was nice how she feels this strange connection to Frank but can't figure out why. It was beautiful and so sad. I wonder what he is thinking too.

I also like that you had Augusta introduce herself. I got the feeling that this was a very typical interaction and she introduced herself every time before speaking to them. Poor Augusta :(

Oh and Neville :( It was so sad to see that she didn't remember him! But it made me really happy when she at least remembered his name at the end. I imagine that would probably be so wonderful for Neville. Even though she still doesn't really know him, I'm sure he'd be thrilled when she knew his name for a moment.

You wrote a really amazing story and I wish I could give it an 11/10 because you deserve it! (Oh and GO HUFFLEPUFF)

Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much, Kristin! :D

I wanted it to be like SUPER VAGUE but I didn't want it to be so vague that no one understood it so I'm glad to hear that my vague-ness was done well. :D

I would absolutely LOVE to do a one-shot from Frank's POV but this was SO HARD TO WRITE and I have very little time so I'm not going to do it, but maybe one day I will and then I'll post it everywhere on the forums so people can read it. :p

Anyway, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Sorry about the ridiculous lateness of this response!

So yeah, thanks for this lovely review!

- Kayla. ♥


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