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Review:SereneChaos says:
Oh, I think this would make a great two-shot or short story! I especially liked Fleur's attempt to dissuade Louis from searching for the veela. I like the little comments Louis makes that make him seem all the more like a real person (ie, how under normal circumstances he'd have no problem with a pretty lady trying to kiss him, lol). I do think that as a one-shot (or even a chapter in a short story), there could be a little more of a wrap up in this section just to make the story so far seem a little more cohesive, if that makes any sense. Otherwise, I think you're off to a great start!

Author's Response: I always felt that Fleur always has a Molly Weasley-type of attitude when it comes to her children; it's hard to imagine that she'd let her child walk into danger without some advice. Louis is a character that isn't too popular in the Next-Generation stories so I wanted to try to give him some personality, so I'm glad that you liked it! I definitely understand what you mean by there can be some more wrap-up. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!(:

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