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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hello there! This is DarkRose from Ravenclaw on the forums here to review for you for the House Cup 2013! :D So, let's go over things:

Characterization: So, Teddy and Dominique! I've never really read any stories about them, but this was really sweet and I think you captured both of their personalities really well. I have an oddly similar Teddy/Victoire story with a picnic. ;) I liked that Teddy was so secretive and cute about his plan. And I think Dom was really sweet, although I do wonder what she was stressed about.

Descriptions: I loved your descriptions of the island! It sounds glorious (haha, that's the title of my Teddy/Victoire story!). Really good job. I was surprised to hear that Teddy chose dark hair and eyes and that Dom was a redhead, but I really liked that. Good job.

Emotions: I think I might have liked to see more about how the two of them were feeling during the story. I know she liked him and was awed at the island, but I'd like to SEE that somehow...if that makes sense.

Plot: This was really cute! Yay for fluff. ;) I'm quite fond of best-friend turned boyfriend/girlfriend stories since that's how my boyfriend and I ended up together, so this was really sweet to read. I really liked it. Good job!

Interactions: I liked that Dom wasn't originally all cutesy with Teddy. It was nice that she was kind of annoyed with him for taking her away from her work. It was refreshing since I think any more fluff would have sent it over the edge into annoying-territory. ;)

Overall, this was really cute and sweet and I think you did a great job! I hope you have a wonderful night and good luck with the House Cup!

--Emily

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.

I am glad you liked Teddy and Dominique's personality. Haha, then I'll have to check your story out sometime xP I am pleased you liked Teddy's plan and Dom.

Actually, I've been to such an island and it is pretty divine so I am glad it came through the descriptions. I always imagined my version of Dom to be a redhead and Teddy to be dark haired and black eyed so yeah xD

Ah, the part about the emotions totally makes sense yeah. I wrote this in a kind of rushed manner, so I'll definitely work on that when I edit. Thank you for the CC.

Haha I am not much of fluff writer but I tried my best so glad you liked all the cute stuff. I love the whole bestfriend turned boyfriend/girlfriend thing too!

It's a relief that you didn't already find it in annoying territory. I wanted to include some believability and Dom's irritation was my best shot xP

I am happy you liked this overall. Thanks.


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