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Review:marauderfan says:
I loved this! Sirius is probably my favourite character from the series and I like the way you portrayed him here. I love that he and Regulus are still on civil terms, and that Regulus is clearly concerned about Sirius running away. Your explanation of why all Sirius's Gryffindor things remained on the wall was great!

I think it was perfectly fitting that Sirius got help from Muggles as well, and how that reinforced that he'd made the right decision to run away. And the man who gave him a lift - if I'm not wrong, he was the one Sirius stole the bike from! I thought that was a nice addition haha.

Great job!!

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! This was my first time writing about Sirius and I was pretty nervous about it. I always had it in my head that Sirius and Regulus were as civil as could be, at least at first. I think they may have had a falling out later, but I wanna think, even if just in my own little world, that Sirius always had a soft spot in his heart for his little brother.

I hadn't planned on incorporating muggles into the story, but I admit that they kinda worked themselves in pretty well. And yes...the man who gave him a ride was the owner of the bike! :)
Thanks a bunch for the read and review!


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