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Review:marauderfan says:
I liked this! It was great to see Charlie's early interest in dragons, and I loved that he decided to run away on a magic carpet in order to get there. He was quite the rebel!

Your descriptions of flying the carpet were great, I liked how when it stopped it was like the scenery stopped and not him. I guess flying a carpet wasn't quite as easy as Charlie thought - lucky someone stopped him when he fell!

My favourite line was this: "his mum would have killed him if hed have died running away from home." Haha! I think it was in character for Arthur and Charlie to try and keep it a secret as well - after all, in CoS when Harry and Ron stole the car Arthur had no desire to tell Molly about it, so I think it could have happened in this case too. But I have the feeling that after the end of the story, Molly finds out about Charlie (and Arthur) running away ;)

Great work, this was a fun story!

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