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Review:marauderfan says:
Reviewing for the HC! I really liked this. It's a very muggle story - it really had very little to do with the wizarding world, but I liked that about it. It showed how teenage witches with crushes are no different to teenage muggles!

I adored how awkward she was, and how she stalked him on the bus. What a great description of teenage crushes, haha. I could identify with her a little, especially about how it was nice to be sitting behind Elbow Patch instead of in front. (There was a guy I liked in my youth symphony in high school and he sat behind me, so I always had to turn around to look at him! But I digress.) The thing that got me the most was when she repeatedly drew pictures of the back of his head, haha. This was a really fun read, I loved it! Great job!

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for the lovely review! I think every teenage girl is the same really, whether they can do magic or not- I'm glad it showed through in my story!

I think every girl has that one boy who they stalk a little, haha. Mine was in English class- he always sat conveniently opposite me, which was useful! It must've been very annoying to have to look at him all the time :P

Anyway, thank you for the absolutely /darling/ review!


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