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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Bethany! If this is what you can write while under pressure then I am blown away as I thought this was amazing! ♥

I think the thing which really made this one-shot be so awesome is the sentence structure of it. The use of short sentences sort of represented how short his life was and then having those interspersed with the longer ones every now and then really created something quite wonderful and it just flowed so brilliantly!

The moment you chose to write about is so poignant in my opinion but so brilliantly executed. Regulus seemed to be at terms with the fact that his life was about to end, there really wasnít anything which could be done to save him but the acceptance of it and the mental calm of it was really excellent. To do what he did, I would expect him to have that so your characterisation of him at this point was brilliant.

The use of travel in this one-shot was great because he was on a mission yet, again, itís almost this is the end of his life and heís about to travel to the next so you can interpret the theme in lots of ways. Kreacher was sort of his companion in bridging these two moments together and he appeared to be some sort of angel and it really was beautiful. I sort of saw him as a guardian too, and having that gave Regulus that little bit of hope of perhaps living which enabled him to do what he did.

I really loved this line ĎAnd he isnít drunk, but he is intoxicated in a way- intoxicated with the idea of conquering his fears, his foes. Intoxicated with hope.Ď ♥

The last few lines were really horrible in a brilliant way. I only say horrible due to what they made me feel but showing that it evoked such a powerful emotion in me is a really high-level of skill so donít worry about that. This conversation he had with the darkness could almost be seen as with his conscious and him battling away with the rights and wrongs of the world and it was a really clever end to the one-shot.

A brilliant piece of work, Bethany ♥


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