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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there! So...this is my review for the House Cup! Woo! Yeah, I suck at introductions.

I thought this was a really cool idea, and Luna is always an interesting character to read about. I've attempted writing her a couple of times and have always found it extremely difficult, so I think you did a really great job! She still seemed very Luna-ish (as in from her Hogwarts days) yet you could definitely tell that she'd grown up a lot.

Actually, your characterization of all your characters was fantastic, and I like that you included a canon character as minor as Alicia.

I've never read a Luna/Rolf story before, so this was a first time experience for me, and I loved your portrayal of Rolf! He seemed so sweet and cuddly and absolutely perfect for Luna!

This was a really cool, fun one-shot to read, and I think you incorporated travel really well. Nice work!


Author's Response: Hi, thanks for stopping by :)

Luna is definitely one of the harder characters for me to write, but I like her because she's light even when difficult and dark things are happening. I tried to play up her quirks in a subtle way and could see adding a few more if I decided to expand this into a short story.

Rolf was fun to explore, especially since I didn't have any parameters, unlike with Luna!

Thanks for your lovely review!


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