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Review:typewriter says:
I thought this idea was very clever! I enjoyed the twists and turns of it, the curiosity that was peaked when Sirena came into the picture and then the cliffhanger ending where we were left to guess what would happen now that she had revealed her true nature to him and he had gone underwater with her. Some things I found that you might wish to go back and reread are some typos. For example, at the very start of the fic you write "...to urge his eyes", which I think you may have meant as "he had to fight the urge to roll his eyes" or something of the sort. There are other moments like that throughout the story, like writing "arrogance" when meaning "arrogant" when talking about Louis' personality. Nevertheless, it was very creative and I enjoyed the read!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you found the one-shot interesting! I definitely was rushing through the proofreading part of uploading a story because I was worried that I wouldn't get it in on time. Thank you for pointing it out, and thanks for reading and reviewing! (:

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