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Review:marauderfan says:
This was FABULOUS. I was already laughing after reading the first two words: "Voldemort strutted". The idea of the super pasty characters like Voldemort, Lucius and Snape going to tan and get on a party boat in Spain is really great. And I love that they're fashion designers. If Voldemort hadn't decided to be a Dark Lord, I think he could have made it as a designer. :D

What I think you did the best is that all the characters still have their same personalities, just exaggerated. Bellatrix was particularly good - just as clingy, and I'd imagine she'd be a reckless driver haha. I loved it when she told the "infernal child" to stop messing up her hair. And Snape changed his loyalties to Harry. It was perfect!

I want to quote back all the parts that I loved, but then I might just be pasting the entire story in the review. So, well done! This was so fun to read. :D

Author's Response: Hi there!

I'm so glad that you liked it so much! Bahaha it's funny seeing pale people attempt to tan so I couldn't help but include it. Of course they're fashion designers, who wouldn't want to be one? After all, he did invent the dark mark!

I'm so glad that you found they still had the same personalities as I was a little worried they were too OOC! I wouldn't have mind if you quoted things back, I enjoy reading it!

Thanks for an amazing review,


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