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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Taylor, I decided to come and check out your HC one-shot too! Surprisingly, I had never read a Luna/Rolf story before the HC but this is the second Iíve already come across!

I think one thing which really made this one-shot was the inclusion of all of Lunaís little quirks such as her wearing Wellies and having a multi-coloured umbrella. Though theyíre such minor things they really added so much to the story and created a great sense of realism and it enhanced her character nicely.

The nod towards the Luna/Neville ships was really great. Iíve always enjoyed that pairing so seeing it have a brief mention here was lovely. I liked her sort of confusion towards her feelings of jealously as it fitted nicely with her character, because I always imagined her to be a character which didnít always know how to deal with emotions related to love and whatnot.

Her using muggle transport, again, added to her quirky character and I loved the fact that she met Rolf there. It such a normal place for such a unique pair of people so that was lovely. Then the fact that they bonded over the Quibbler! I think the dash of humour with her trying to say she still liked Neville but couldnít deal with her emotions relating to him was great and made her oddly human for such a strange person.

The ending of this one-shot was truly adorable ♥ Only those two would find searching for Gulping Plimpies fun! It suggested the future of where their relationship was going in a nice, indirect way. Ooh I forgot to mention earlier so Iíll say it here, but the fact that you included all of the creatures was great because thatís such a vital part of her life but one that people often forget.

I really love this one-shot, Taylor. Great work!

-Kiana

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