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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
This is such a cute little one-shot, dear! I really liked it!

I think your characterization of Tibbie is incredible. Everything she does and says is just spot-on lovesick teenager! From her naming him Elbow Patch because she doesn't know his name, to 'stalking' him by riding the bus every day, and to her "planning their wedding"... it's all SO teenage girl-ish!

I was really glad that Henry showed up, to show her that not all guys are so mean. And that sometimes love shows up when you don't expect it... :P She only had the intention of going after Elbow Patch, but wound up starting something with Henry! So cute! And I just loved the way they bonded over riding buses and cake!

The way Tibbie said that he was 'perfect' because he'd gotten the right answer on the cake question makes me wonder if she'll be stalking him soon. But at the same time, something tells me that might not be necessary! :P I loved that Tibbie took charge in asking him to get some cake, and even MORE that he said yes.

And yes, Elbow Patch is just downright rude and mean! If he really DOES have a girlfriend, he won't have one long with that attitude! :P

Great read, dear!

Author's Response: Hi, lovely!
I'm glad you liked my characterisation like, incredible, omg that's like the nicest thing! I'm glad you thought she was teenage girly and everything!

Ah Henry is my favourite knight in shining armour! I think buses and cake are excellent things to bond over, so I'm glad you liked it too!

I think Elbow Patch is one of those boys who always has a girlfriend for a month or two, and then promptly breaks up with them to go on to the next gullible idiot really. He's so, so not nice!

Anyway my darling, thank you so much for the absolutely a+ review, it was really great to respond to! I hope you have a lovely day ♥

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