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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
This is absolutely adorable! I couldn't resist reading this story when I saw it was about magic carpets. They're the one magical item that I've love to see included in more stories because they're just so much fun (and maybe it's also because I liked the carpet in "Aladdin"). The descriptions you included about how the carpets worked and what the one looks like was just what I was hoping to see - the rest of the story turned out to be a lovely treat.

Your creativity in this story, especially the idea of a wizarding tourist destination that's actually a whole little country covered by Muggle wards, is fantastic. There's a great whimsical quality about it that also reflects in the narration with Hannah's added emphases. Seeing her thoughts in that form gave her a lot of personality - I could easily imagine the bubbly Hufflepuff who loves quiet, happy things. You demonstrate why she's a perfect match for Neville, who is equally well-characterized. I like the implied contrast between his status as war hero and the humble, reserved young wizard who has to write his proposal speech in advance. That scene left me squeeing from the cuteness. Usually I don't enjoy fluff like this, but something in your style and the way that you executed this idea made it a highly satisfying read. It reminds me that I have to come back and read more of your stories. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks Violet! That's all so sweet of you to say! I'm glad you liked it, even if it was fluffy, haha!

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