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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
This was really interesting. I like stories of wizards in the muggle world and a bus journey is very muggle! Personally I would have liked if the main character was one from cannon but that's just my preference. I loved the funny little nickname for her mystery crush and the fact that she spent so long admiring the back of his head (something all girls have done at one point in their lives!) it made her seem like a typical teenage girl. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar problems and it flowed well. Nice job :)

Author's Response: Hello! I'm glad you found my story interesting. I did think about using a canon character but I couldn't really think of anyone suitable, haha. Thank you so much for the review!

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