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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
What a great first chapter! (I know this is a one-shot, by the way!) What I'm trying to say is... THIS needs to be a full-blown story!! Seriously!!

I think this is a great plot you've got lined up! And Victoire's characterization is SO unique, even down to her RED (not blonde) hair; I really like it! I won't lie, a part of me secretly hopes she'll go running back into Teddy's arms, but I love the story regardless!

I thought it was very realistic and understandable that Bill would be so protective of Victoire. I imagine that everyone who was around at the time of the Battle of Hogwarts would always have to deal with a fear of things returning to the way they were, especially if they lost someone, like Bill did.

All in all, I think this is a wonderful one-shot and a great story in the making! *Winks*

Author's Response: Hello! :) Haha, funny you should mention that because I'm seriously considering turning this into a short story collection or short story detailing more of Victoire's adventures. They're so fun and light to write, so you may see more of Vic yet! :)

I'm glad you liked Victoire and her personality, I really enjoyed coming up with her and trying to make her unique. And hey, if this story continues the saga of Teddy is definitely not completely done with. :P

I'm also pleased you thought Bill being over-protective was believable, I liked writing Vic's frustration even thouhh she knows where he's coming from.

Thank you for this wonderful review, my dear! :)


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