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Review:Debra20 says:
This was...perfection. I sincerely cannot find the proper words to tell you how much it touched me. I think I cried from beginning to end because there was no other way to express my emotions.

I think I remember reading other stories that focused on Alice or Frank's life after they were tortured by the Death Eaters and lost their minds, but I can't remember one half as anguishing as this. I LOVE the Longbottoms. The story of their life and how it all ended for them is so bitter-sweet, that you can't help but feel sorry for them and love reading about them. Not only were they talented wizards, but they were amazing human beings as well. I don't think there's a single person in the books that can say anything bad about them. I'm simply fascinated with them and I jump on every opportunity I get to read about the pair.

You're very good at writing angst. The feelings were believable and the way you knitted the theme of the HC with the overall story was perfect. It felt like it belonged there. The way Alice remembers her life with Frank and Neville, her disjointed thoughts and tangled memories broke my heart. Their ending was so unfair and so tragic I still find my stomach hurting when I think about it. Not remembering who you are or your loved ones is one of the most terrible misfortunes that can befall a person.

I loved crying with this story. I think I'll add it to my favourites!

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much!

I'm so glad you liked it! It was super hard to write and I put in SO MUCH EFFORT. Glad to know that it paid off, though. :D

This review is just so lovely I want to squeeze you in a massive bear-hug! :D

Thank you so much for leaving this review, and sorry for taking like a WEEK to answer it. D:

Anyway, thanks again! ♥

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